Granny for Sale by Diamond Wayne

Second placed in the 13 to 17 age category – Wadadli Pen Challenge 2016

Author’s comment: “I love writing poems and reading. Sometimes.”

Judge’s comments (positives only*): “I enjoyed this. It has potential. It caught me right away with the nursery rhyme feel.”

Note: *While only the positives are being shared with the public, in keeping with the development goals of Wadadli Pen, all long listed entries are returned to the author with the judge’s note  – both positives and negatives – for revision. Congrats to Diamond (love your name by the way), for placing as high as she did in the contest, for being receptive to and attempting to iron out the poem’s wrinkles – and regret that the Challenge’s resources don’t allow for further opportunity, at this time, to workshop it. I agree with the judge; it has lots of potential. Keep working on your craft; keep valuing your voice and your art. – JCH

Diamond Wayne

Diamond Wayne.

Here now is Granny for Sale by Diamond Wayne, 14, science lover, aspiring nurse, and student at Glanvilles Secondary:

 

A wicked boy named Tom
Pushed his grandmother
Round in a barrow
As he called out loud
As he rang his bell
Granny for sale she nah feed me!
Granny for sale she like beat me!
His friends said as he passed them by.
This poor old lady , we’ll not buy.
He surely must be a mischievous child
To try and sell his only granny; he so wild!
Besides! Said another, if he ask me a very good  old lady she always be
So Tom scratched his head and took his granny off the sale
And rang his bell through all the towns
Till he trade his borrow for half a crown
Tom  took the half a crown and give it to his granny as a birthday gift.

For placing second in her age category, Diamond received:
A certificate sponsored by the Best of Books
EC$160 (courtesy Dr. Hazra Medica)
Selected Poems by Lorna Goodison (courtesy Pamela Arthurton of Carib World Travel )
Books and a Certificate sponsored by the Best of Books

Thanks to all partners and patrons for making the Wadadli Pen 2016 Challenge possible. Here at Wadadli Pen, we encourage you to support the businesses and individuals who support the arts.

Please respect the writer’s copyright. And while we welcome feedback, please be constructive.

2 Comments

Filed under A & B Lit News Plus, A & B WRITINGS, Wadadli Pen 2016, Wadadli Pen News

2 responses to “Granny for Sale by Diamond Wayne

  1. LONDIWE SIE

    I READ THIS POEM IN PRIMARY SCHOOL,IN 1993. OVERPORT S.R.S PRIMARY SCHOOL WHEN I WAS IN GRADE 6. THINK THE NAME OF THE BOOK WAS BRIGHTER ENGLISH.

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