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Forward On by Dante Barton

Forward On

Author: Dante Barton

Winner: Short story 11
& under

Once there was a vicious tiger that terrorized and stole the food
from two villages. Sadly, the two villages hadn’t liked each other for a long
time, and often fought over the little things. One day, the tiger seriously
injured a child from each village. The villagers finally realized that the only
way to solve the problem of the tiger was to work together and trap it. A great
trap was set by the two villages, and the tiger was caught and sold to the zoo.
Then the villagers realized that once they work together they can move forward.

 

 

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Bee pics 2011

Thanks to Margo of Frank B. Armstrong for these mementos of Wadadli Pen’s participation in the Haliborange-Rotaract Spelling Bee, though even she has acknowledged that they’re not the best. So, consider them the teaser and hopefully we’ll have better pics of the full event in  time. But suffice it to say the Bee finalists did amazingly well, as you’ll find in this article. Congrats to the winner, Keondre Herbert of St. John’s Catholic Primary.

And 2010 Bee finalist and 2011 Wadadli Pen finalist, Zuri Holder, a student of Sunnyside Tutorial and long time Cushion Club member, was selected to read his story The Scary Night at the event, following my brief introduction. Here’s a grainy record of both our participation in the programme:

introducing Zuri

 

Zuri delivering, with a capital D

 

 

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Independence celebration in Canada connects home and the Diaspora

ST JOHN’S, Antigua – A stimulating experience, a good mix of genders and generations, a satisfying experience overall; all phrases that have been used to describe the two-day programme organised by, and targetting, Antiguans and Barbudans residing in Canada.

The event, held at the University of Toronto, was part of the Antigua & Barbuda Consulate’s programme of activities marking the 30th anniversary of Antigua & Barbuda’s Independence. Read the rest at Daily Observer.

I’ll share pics soon as they become available.

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Caribbean writers singled out in Commonwealth Short Story competition

Winners of the 2011 Commonwealth Short Story competition have been announced and there are two Caribbean-ers among them. The first is Barbara Jenkins of Trinidad and Tobago: Regional Winner from the Caribbean for her story Head Not Made For Hat Alone. “I wrote the story,” she’s quoted as saying, “after a particularly dystopian  morning on the road. Everything in the story is real – culled from a  number of experiences and observations. So perhaps the writing was a  sort of catharsis?”

I should note that I first came across Jenkins’ name recently when flipping through Volume 24 of the Caribbean Writer: on the page announcing the year’s prize winners her head-thrown-back-in-full-laugh picture as the Winner of the Canute A. Brodhurst Prize for Short Fiction was two slots above the picture announcing me as the Winner of the David Hough Literary Prize for a Writer Living in the Caribbean. Kind of cool to be two degrees of (no not Kevin Bacon but) separation away from a winner of the highly competitive Commownwealth Short Story Competition. I can think of only two Antiguans and Barbudans who made the cut in recent years, Hazra Medica, whose story, the Banana Stains, was among those Highly Commended in 2008 and Mary Geo Quinn  whose story, Joe, was similarly Highly Commended in 2002 Commonwealth Short Story Winners 2002.

Winning is kind of a big deal given the international scope of the competition as noted by the other Caribbean notable of 2011, Diane Brown, a Jamaican whose story, The Happiness Dress, won a Special Prize as a Story for Children. She said, “Winning this special prize for a short story for  children is a singular honour. This acknowledgement of the work of a  local writer of children’s fiction gives that writing an international  platform.”

Per a release from the Commonwealth, “a panel of international judges made the choices from over 2000 entries”. Overall 2011 winner was Philip Nash of the UK with his story Rejoinder. Best regional entries, in addition to Jenkins, were Martha by Basett Buyukah of Kenya, The Maoist by Nikesh Murali of India, and Ginger Beer by Sarah Bainbridge, New Zealand.

The winning stories – all 26 of them – will also be available in audio format. In fact, it may interest you, dear reader, to note that when I was formulating the structure for the Wadadli Pen competition back in 2003, I did a little piggy backing in terms of the word limit on the Commonwealth Short Story competition because like that competition I wanted entries to be a good and compact length for radio broadcast. So, audio recordings and distribution to media outlets of the winning entries have been part of our mission and action from day one. In fact, if you visit, Anansesem* – the Caribbean Children’s e-zine – you’ll hear some of the recordings that came out of our competition in the early years in  their special Wadadli Pen issue. If I could figure out how to do it, I’d post them here, too; and soon as I can figure out funding, we’ll do more of the same. Point is though rather than reinventing the wheel, I did take some cues re structure from the Commonwealth contest, adapting it, of course, to be its own thing relevant to our context in Antigua and Barbuda (and the Caribbean).

Anyway, that’s enough rambling. Congratulations to winners from the region, past and present, and, since the competition is an annual exercise, dare we say, future. Deadline for the next round of submissions is November 30th; details re eligibility will be posted at www.commonwealthwriters.org by October 18th according to this release posted to the Caribbean Literary Salon.

For the full list of winners and their stories, as well as back editions, go to http://www.commonwealthfoundation.com/Howwedeliver/Prizes/CommonwealthShortStoryCompetition/2011winners

THIS JUST IN: Commendation also went to Kathyann Husbands and Edwina Griffiths of Barbados, and Sonja Dumas of Trinidad and Tobago; for Love Honour and Obey, White Shoes, and Letting Cockroaches Live, respectfully.

*Please note Anansesem is currently in the process of being re-located to here.

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Post Note

Post contest, winners have been making the media rounds; Devra Thomas, as overall and 18 to 35 winner, has been contacted by and will be featured in a pending publication by News Pages; and Orique Gordon, along with other winners in the 12 and under category, Zuri Holder and Keillia Mentor appeared with their parents on Auntie Debbie’s Our House on Observer Radio. Winning stories through the years will be featured in a special issue of online children’s journal, Anansesem.

But it’s the small moments that resonate…receiving the edits of the short listed pieces from the writers
(who readily embraced the redrafting process guided by Judge Brenda Lee Browne’s comments), preparing and delivering the prizes (it’s a bit like wrapping presents at Christmas), and feedback like this…

Orique sharing that he’s started work on another story, Zuri sharing that he just keeps staring at the cheque he received (not depositing or cashing it, just staring at it!), their faces as they read their stories on air (nerves and joy in one nice bundle), the pride in the parents’ voices…

And emails like these:

“We were thrilled to be a part of such a lovely event and Freya was blown over with all her ‘Winnings’. We have been to
register with Edison and I am (sure) she will benefit greatly from his expertise .”
– from the mom of eight year old Freya Platts-Costeloe
(second in the art contest…the Edison mentioned is Edison Liburd who donated two scholarships worth EC$300+ each to his art camp to the two art winners)

“Elated mother (what a mother’s day gift)”
– from Orique’s mom on learnng her son had made the finals.

“I am so grateful to write and receive encouragement…you inspire me to step out”
– from Devra after her win.

The truth is, they inspire me.

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Wadadli Pen 2011 Winners’ Release

The winners of the 2011 Wadadli Pen Challenge were announced and awarded Saturday night, during day one of the Best of Books 10-year-anniversary Outdoor Book and Story Fair at the University Centre.

The overall winner was stay-at-home-mom and Anglican youth worker Devra
Thomas, author of Sands and Butterflies. Eleven-year-old Minoah Magnet student Orique Gordon, author of The Lost Coin tied for second place with Shakeema Edwards, a 17-year-old Antigua State College student and author of The Curse of the Kumina. Princess Margaret School student Chatrisse Beazer, 16-year-old author of The Legend of Banana Boy, was third.

The judges praised the “natural dialogue” and “lovely pace” of Sands and Butterflies, a story involving a mother-daughter beach adventure but about much more. The Lost Coin, a story told from a unique perspective, was said to have a “nice rhythm” while the author of Curse of the Kumina “pack(ed) in conflict, humour and a resolution” in her story. The Legend of Banana Boy, meanwhile, was a bit of old school storytelling with an unlikely superhero described as having “nice tension and natural rhythm.”

READ THE REST AT http://www.antiguaobserver.com/?p=60621

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COCOS NUCIFERA BY S A DIXON

As a girl, they told her never to play under the coconut trees. And Sarah Appleton might have listened, except yesterday her
mother had thrown a very important book across the fence.

It wasn’t the type of book that came home from school listed on a slip of paper. Its author was unknown to anyone except those who liked fluorescent pink covers that yielded pages stained with saucy words.

Sarah had tried to tell her mother the book wasn’t hers, but before she could promise to return it to its owner right away, Maggie had arched her arm like a cricketer and bowled it at the single tree stump that dominated the space next door. Sarah was out.
Today she was lying on top the square water tank overlooking her mother’s clothesline, armed with a stack of chicken bones from last night’s dinner. These would distract the dog on the other side of the enclosure. She imitated her mother, and flung the bones at one of the farthest mounds of fallen branches that feathered the ground beneath the tree.
The dog was black, with ribs as thin as Sarah’s fingers. If it had barked too much, Sarah knew her mother might have peeked through the kitchen window to find out why. Then she would have seen Sarah slipping through one of the spaces between the rusted galvanise and flattened oil drums nailed up along the board fence.
The chicken bones had sunk between the thin, flexible branches that Sarah and Denny, the boy up the street, often fashioned into miniature nooses and tried to slip around the necks of unsuspecting lizards.

The dog had buried its nose into one of the spaces in the stack when the coconut fell, without warning, pulled by gravity
from the tree that swayed above their heads like a loaded gun, in winds that hinted of unrest somewhere out in the Atlantic.

The dog tasted a pain sharper than the bones it had been trying to swallow. It ran to the street, dragging its suddenly useless back legs under a car that had been taking someone to the bread shop around the corner. The thud brought Sarah’s mother and the neighbour out to see what had happened.

“Oh lawd! Me dog dead!” Miss Thompson said, hoping the driver would at least be willing to take the carcass someplace where
she wouldn’t have to smell it when it ripened.

At first, no one noticed that Sarah was missing. And by then, she had forgotten all about the pink book that had already been spoiled by last night’s passing showers.

Sarah was leaning against the tank, trying to shake the dog’s last cries from her head. Her back was pressed against the sheet of metal that chilled her just slightly less than what had almost just happened to her.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR:

SA Dixon, second placed in the 18 to 35 age category (literary arts) of the Wadadli Pen 2011 Challenge, is an Antiguan-born author living in Kansas City, Missouri. She has previously focused on non-fiction, but has lately been concentrating on delving into more imaginative works.

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Who Won in 2011?

Congrats to all the winners!

Thanks to all partners and sponsors.

Admittedly, we’d still love to see more entries, and this was a tough year for attracting prizes, but we got some really quality pieces(read and see for yourself), and we tried to evenly distribute what we were able to attract (weighing in sponsor preferences) and keeping in mind that the prizes are an incentive not the point of creating.

In addition to prizes mentioned, all winners receive a certificate from the Wadadli Pen team; plus the Challenge plaque, sponsored by Best of Books, has been emblazoned with the winner’s name and will hang in the store until it is updated with the next winner’s name.

VISUAL ART AWARDS

First Placed:

Hudle Jennings
for illustration of Sands and Butterflies story (writer: Devra Thomas)

Prize Package –

  • Art Camp scholarship – Edison Arts
  • EC$250 – Caribbean Alliance  Insurance Company Ltd.
  • Hula Girl (framed art piece) – Jennifer Meranto

Second Placed:

Hudle Jennings
for illustration of The Curse of the Kumina (writer: Shakeema Edwards)

Prize Package –

  • EC$125 – Caribbean Alliance Insurance Company Ltd.
  • Books –
    • All That Glitters is Not Gold – Marcel Marshall (author)
    • The Boy from Willow Bend –
      Joanne C. Hillhouse (author)
    • The Scarlet Letter (author: Nathaniel Hawthorne – audio book) – the Best of Books

Third Placed:

Freya Platts-Costeloe
(8, Island Academy) for illustration of The Scary Story (writer: Zuri Holder)

Prize Package –

  • Art camp scholarship – Edison Arts
  • EC$75 – Caribbean Alliance Insurance Company Ltd.
  • Freedom (framed art piece)
    – Jennifer Meranto
  • Art project books – The Best of Books
  • A children’s music CD –
    Joanne C. Hillhouse

LITERARY ARTS AWARDS

12 and Under

First Placed:

The Lost Coin
by Orique Gordon (11, Minoah Magnet Academy)

Prize Package –

  • EC$150 – Caribbean Alliance  Insurance Company Ltd.
  • A selection of children’s books and gifts – The Best of Books
  • Boat Boys (framed art piece) – Jennifer Meranto
  • Party gift certificate – K & E Party Time

Second Placed:

The Scary Night
by Zuri Holder (10, Sunnyside
Tutorial)

Prize Package –

  • EC$75 – Caribbean Alliance Insurance Company Ltd.
  • A selection of children’s books and gifts – The Best of Books
  • Book – Ninth Ward – Jewell Parker Rhodes (author)

Third Placed:

Mongoose in the Hole
by Keillia Mentor (10, Buckley’s Primary)

Prize Package –

  • EC$75 – Caribbean Alliance Insurance Company Ltd.
  • A selection of children’s books and gifts – The Best of Books
  • Book – Ninth Ward – Jewell Parker Rhodes (author)

13 to 17

First Placed:

The Legend of Banana Boy
by Chatrisse Beazer (16, Princess Margaret School)

Prize Package –

  • EC$350 (and miscellaneous gifts) – ABI Insurance
  • Books – Turn Thanks (author: Lorna Goodison) & Prospero’s Daughter (author: Elizabeth Nunez) – Antigua and Barbuda International   Literary Festival

Second Placed:

The Curse of the Kumina by Shakeema Edwards
(17, Antigua State College)

Prize Package –

  • EC$250 (and miscellaneous gifts) – ABI Insurance
  • Books – Turn Thanks
    (author: Lorna Goodison) & Prospero’s Daughter (author: Elizabeth
    Nunez) – Antigua and Barbuda International Literary Festival

Third Placed:

Pre School Days
by Ardis Lavelle (17, Antigua State College)

Prize Package –

  • EC$150 (and miscellaneous gifts) – ABI Insurance
  • Books – Turn Thanks (author: Lorna Goodison) & Prospero’s Daughter (author: Elizabeth Nunez) – Antigua and Barbuda International Literary Festival
  • Book – All that Glitters is not Gold – Marcel Marshall (author)

18 to 35

First Placed:

Sands and Butterflies by Devra Thomas

Prize Package –

  • EC$150 (and miscellaneous gifts) – ABI Insurance
  • EC$150 – D. Gisele Isaac
  • Books – Sugar (author: Bernice McFadden) & Selected Poems (author: Lorna Goodison) – Antigua and Barbuda International Literary Festival

Second Placed:

Cocos Nucifera
by S A Dixon

Prize Package –

  • EC$100 – D. Gisele Isaac
  • Valise – Benetton
  • Books – Sugar (author: Bernice McFadden) & Selected Poems (author: Lorna Goodison) – Antigua and Barbuda International Literary Festival

Third Placed:

Market Day
by Latisha Walker-Jacobs

Prize Package –

  • EC$100 (and miscellaneous gifts) – ABI Insurance
  • Vegetable Stand (framed art piece) – Jennifer Meranto
  • Books – Sugar (author: Bernice McFadden) & Selected Poems (author: Lorna Goodison) – Antigua and Barbuda International Literary Festival

OVERALL WINNERS

First Placed:

Sands and Butterflies by Devra Thomas

Prize Package –

  • Trophy – ABI Insurance
  • EC$500 – International Women’s Club of Antigua and Barbuda
  • Books –
  • The Caribbean Writer 2010 Edition & The Boy from Willow Bend – Joanne C. Hillhouse (author)
  • Pink Teacups and Blue Dresses & Through the Window – Floree Williams (author)

Second Placed (tie):

The Lost Coin
by Orique Gordon

Prize Package –

  • EC$175 – Frank B. Armstrong/Seven Seas
  • A children’s music CD – Joanne C. Hillhouse
  • Books – Captain’s Courageous (author: Rudyard Kipling – audio book)

Second Placed (tie):

The Curse of the Kumina
by Shakeema Edwards

Prize Package –

  • EC$175 – Frank B. Armstrong/Seven Seas
  • Book – Anna in-Between (author: Elizabeth Nunez) – Antigua and Barbuda International Literary Festival

Third Placed:

The Legend of Banana Boy by Chatrisse Beazer

Prize Package –

  • EC$150 – Frank B. Armstrong/Seven Seas
  • Book – Anna in-Between (author: Elizabeth Nunez) – Antigua and Barbuda International Literary Festival

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Redrafting

One of the more joyful moments for me during this year’s Wadadli Pen contest – the judging of which is now complete – was receiving the redrafts of most of the short listed pieces. I say most because one writer did not take up the opportunity to review, revise, and resubmit the piece; but, glass is half full, eight of the nine finalists did. The improvements to the re-submitted pieces were noticeable; the stories becoming more fully themselves.

This process was guided by myself and the judges – especially (writing coach) Brenda Lee Browne, who supplied comments specific to each story to help guide the writers shortlisted by first round judge Dotsie Isaac Gellizeau through the review. It was an important exercise, I felt, in helping the young writers (the target group of this programme) understand that writing doesn’t happen in a single breath. It’s not all inspiration, though certainly inspiration is a part of it. Fact is though, writing isn’t paint by the numbers, and for even seasoned writers the process of chiseling a work down to what it can be can take years. And, ideally, what you submit to a contest like this (or to a publication, agent or publisher for consideration) shouldn’t be your first draft. And even after you’ve submitted what could be your 15th or 50th draft, once the work is optioned,  you will still be assigned an editor to help make the work publication ready.  Alternatively, if you’re self-publishing, you’ll likely pay an editor to fulfill this function. Either way, review and revision is part of the writing process. It can be laborious, intense, tedious…but it can be in the end exhilarating.

We hope it was that for this year’s finalists.

We have now collectively determined the overall winners (for both the visual and literary art components of the 2011 challenge), the names will be revealed and the prizes awarded in June at the Best of Books anniversary fair, and there’s still a lot to be done between now and then. But more than anything, I’m thrilled that the writers had the opportunity to see their work evolve. Writing, after all, is a process.

For an interesting discussion on redrafting, check out the Writers Circle.

And finally thanks to the judges – Renee Philip in art, and Dotsie and Brenda Lee in writing – without whose help this entire exercise could not have happened.

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When a Woman Moans 2011

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