So, I thought I’d share some of the feedback to the Wadadli Youth Pen Prize Challenge 2013 season. In part because I hope it’ll continue to spark interest among other young writers still hiding their light under a bushel, potential patrons, media and the general public (and I hope that interest will translate into more support for the programme). In part, because I just want to take a moment to celebrate another successful year of pulling this off against the odds. Thanks to all patrons, partners, and well wishers; thanks especially to our young writers, FOR DARING (it’s not easy putting your work out there as all of us who’ve ever written a word and submitted it somewhere or even asked someone for feedback know all too well). So go read the stories, okay?
Okay, comments, here goes…
Comments VIA EMAIL (scrubbed of identification markers, I hope):
From the mom of one of our younger finalists:
“(My daughter) would like to thank the sponsors who donated her gifts and rest assured she will be reading them. She has almost finished reading Trapped (in) Dunston’s Cave. She is all fired up and is already working on two pieces for next year.”
From one of the teachers:
“I really wanted to say thank you for affording my students and me the opportunity to share our stories and drawings. We will definitely by looking out for the next WADADLI PEN COMPETITION …Now that I’m exposed to what is expected (the stories that won were awesome!!!) I will definitely have to put in some extra work!! Awesome job!! You are a role model to aspiring writers. Shine on!!”
From one of the finalists:
“Just want to let you know that I think that the Wadadli Pen Prize is a great initiative and hope to see it continue!”

Left to right, overall winner Asha Challenger, third placed Zuri Holder, and second placed Daryl George.
ON FACEBOOK:
One teacher said:
“Congrats to Joanne C. Hillhouse and Barbara Arrindell (of the Best of Books) for keeping reading alive, and more importantly, for encouraging our young people to tell our own stories.”
Comment re St. John’s Catholic Primary’s win of US$500 worth of books from Hands across the Sea as the primary school with the most submissions:
“I am so proud to be a part of this school family. Blessings!!!”
“Congrats to my Primary School, I am so proud.”
To the overall winners:
“Education is power, keep up the good work; you guys are our future. I like what I see.”
Re winning story Asha Graham’s Revelations Tonight:
“I really enjoyed this… the scenery was amazing!”
Excerpts from reader comments AT CARIB ARENA:
“ Really like ‘Ceramic Blues’….we really need to come to terms with things and hypocrites in our midst. The story must be told!”
“Great to see this competition for our island’s young people. Congratulations to all winners! Keep up the great work, Joanne Hillhouse and others!”

Me, with the youngest of the 2013 Wadadli Pen finalists – art and lit. (Photo courtesy Antigua Chronicle)
“The Wadadli Pen Challenge is the ONLY serious story competition for the young people of A&B. It deserves far more support, from both the private and government sectors.”
“CONGRATULATIONS to all……keep working on the next chapter because ‘until the Lion tells (writes) his story it will always be told (written) by the hunter’. We’ve already heard a million hunter stories. It is a crying shame that this project, ‘The Wadadli Pen Challenge’ does not get the public support it deserves.”
Comments right here ON WADADLI PEN:
“Giant congratulations to ALL………….keep on taking it to the next chapter.”
“Keep Writing and a big Congrats to all the writers and winners this year.”
“Congratulations on a very timely story Mr. George, one need not be a rocket scientist “to get it”. I hope it gets read by more than just the “usual suspects”…………………….”
FINAL THOUGHT: Okay so for the first time, I think, I’ve left the comment section beneath the stories open. In the past, I felt very protective of the writers because of their ages and so closed the stories off to comments. But you know what, feedback is part of the writing life, so feel free to comment; but be constructive – abusive statements will be deleted.
Thanks for reading…and thanks to Antigua Chronicle for permitting the use of their photos.